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Jotted along the strands of her hair
were secrets that no one was meant to decipher
but his fingers untangled messages and moments
that even angels had been previously unaware of.
Their love was forbidden trysts between dark dirty brick alleyways,
grainy blurred black and white pixeled long range camera snapshots,
filthy and disgusting and perfectly definitely absolutely totally wonderfully
the definition of being so wrong they were right.
were secrets that no one was meant to decipher
but his fingers untangled messages and moments
that even angels had been previously unaware of.
Their love was forbidden trysts between dark dirty brick alleyways,
grainy blurred black and white pixeled long range camera snapshots,
filthy and disgusting and perfectly definitely absolutely totally wonderfully
the definition of being so wrong they were right.
He wouldn't miss her for the world.
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Interesting.
This feels like two perspectives of the same love. The first four lines being told from the point of view of the lovers, the last four from a narrator, almost like a prologue to their story.
But the first four- they are my absolute favorite of this piece. Just beautifully descripted and worded.
This feels like two perspectives of the same love. The first four lines being told from the point of view of the lovers, the last four from a narrator, almost like a prologue to their story.
But the first four- they are my absolute favorite of this piece. Just beautifully descripted and worded.